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You hit me.

You hate me.

You label me.

You judge me.

You reject me.

You blame me.

You laugh at me.

You criticise me.

You threaten me.

You try to guilt me.

You call me names.

You tell me I’m wrong.

You try to manipulate me.

You refuse to apologize to me.

You try to make me responsible.

But you can’t stop me from being me.
Let me know what me think. Hatsune Miku-01 (Good Luck) 
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within-the-silenc Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yay, a piece of writing that I can relate to. Great job. Clap Clap Clap 
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, very much.
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within-the-silenc Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome. :)
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Shadowkat678 Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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gemmstone Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! Thank you! 
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gemmstone Featured By Owner Jun 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yay!
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Asterlia Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Student General Artist
:clap:
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
:excited: 
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Blazefan3669 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
Oh my God, yes!  Finally, someone who believes this as much as I do!  To the favorites!  A lot of people really need to see this, and I thank for putting down what I would always wish I could say.
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
*Blush* Thank you very much for reading this.
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Blazefan3669 Featured By Owner May 27, 2014  Student Writer
Don't mention it!  I love works like this.  It shows me that people hurt, and it shows me who's still human in this world.
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Jojo-Izumi Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student General Artist
I love it. It's simple, but really effective :)
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you.Racing Girl Emoji (Lovely bye bye wave) [V3] 
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Yurizaki Featured By Owner May 23, 2014
This is perfect omg
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner May 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yuuta Togashi (Shy Blush) [V1] Thank you.
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BravoKrofski Featured By Owner Apr 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
amen, I'm sure i'm not the only one who can relate to this poem. :D (Big Grin) 
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading my poem i'm glad that you liked it. Don't ever stop being yourself. Hatsune Miku-13 (Wink and Heart) Miku and Luka (Brofist) [V1] 
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BravoKrofski Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
wouldn't dream of it. w00t! 
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Xedemi Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
The all caps title was kind of a turnoff, but otherwise a good poem. Also, did I use turnoff in  the correct context?
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Apr 4, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It think so. Nod  Well everyone in intitled to their own opinion. Thanks for reading my poem. :nod: 
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Everlasting90 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I think....AWESOME!
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. :iconohyoublushplz: 
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orangesurfblue Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This deserves all of the praise it has gotten and more. Don't stop being you.
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Thank you so much for your kind words. Alma Jinnai (Blush) [V1] 
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orangesurfblue Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Manaka Mukaido (Happy) [V1] 
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The-Waffle-Kid Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
I like it. The message is straight-forward. Good job. C:
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much. Hatsune Miku-02 (Winks) 
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The-Dork-King Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
A -fucking- men to this ! :D I knew this was a favorite of mine the second I saw this and love the over all message this has and sends to people who think they can stop you from being yourself ..
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading my poem. I'am glade that you liked it. Don't ever stop being yourself. Kengo Miyazawa (Just be yourself) [V11] 
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The-Dork-King Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Your welcome and your poem has wisdom that we could use :D I'd rather be myself than what everyone wants me to be :)
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catloversjt Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014
Wow, this is so powerful, I love it! :D
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nymph (Blush) [V1] 
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catloversjt Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Miku and Luka (Brofist) [V1] 
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TheAwkwardFangirl Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can relate to this soo well. o: 
Great job. :)
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you and don't ever stop being who you are. Saya Tokido (Happy) [V9] 
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TheAwkwardFangirl Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
>w< thanks.
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! Hug
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TheFunKeyWays Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It sounds beautiful!!!:D
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Shiori Shiomiya (Shy Blush) [V1] 
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TheFunKeyWays Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Er...hello? XD 
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Er... Hi?
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TheFunKeyWays Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Nothing, the emoticon made me laugh hehe XD*IGOOUT*
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
 Hug
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AkatsukiAndBloodstar Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
This poem reminds me of: www.youtube.com/watch?v=3Q9rew…
Nice.
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you for reading my poem. Reading Emote 
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AkatsukiAndBloodstar Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You're welcome! :hug:
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MyLittleSquirrelGirl Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
Love it! Perfect theme! 
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DuchessRush Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow. Thank you so much. Komari Kamikita (Very Happy) [V2] 
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